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Post by PokemonBlack2andWhite2 on Feb 25, 2012 2:28:09 GMT -5
My first Route original composition ever done,enjoy
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Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2012 2:54:59 GMT -5
Composition is very good! Maybe you should've made this in something other than the RSE soundfonts, but 9/10!
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Post by PokemonBlack2andWhite2 on Feb 25, 2012 8:55:03 GMT -5
Composition is very good! Maybe you should've made this in something other than the RSE soundfonts, but 9/10! I will do a remake of it for the DS,and i might try a Demake for the GB/GBC
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Post by tobinus on Feb 26, 2012 8:42:47 GMT -5
This sounds like a theme for a route after the league, or perhaps the league itself. Personally I would have rewritten the percussion a bit to make it less busy, as well as using "expression" to fade out some of the notes. It's worth learning how to use "expression", because that way it sounds more natural, and the official games use it as well
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Post by Touyato (Chao) on Feb 27, 2012 14:17:07 GMT -5
The composition itself is pretty great! The feeling of accomplishment you get from it makes me think of it like how Tobinus described it.
I also have to agree with most of what tobinus said. The percussion seems a bit busy, but mainly I think you're actually using the wrong snare drum for the march-y sound you're using in the rest of the piece. You should also learn how to use "expression" and other things to polish it up a bit and maybe find a less awkward looping point, and you've got a really good route theme!
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Post by SKTwin1 (L'Ombre) on Feb 27, 2012 17:28:09 GMT -5
This is very well made!
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