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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Oct 30, 2010 21:57:58 GMT -5
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Post by detrimentalist on Oct 31, 2010 20:34:59 GMT -5
First one sounds just a tad Zelda-inspired... just a little bit. They're all good, pretty cool compositions.
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Nov 2, 2010 18:17:41 GMT -5
First one sounds just a tad Zelda-inspired... just a little bit. They're all good, pretty cool compositions. Thanks! www.box.net/shared/y79de8x0tl^For this one, I'm not sure what to do next or what to fix, so comments, criticism, and errr uhhhh mmm iunno, advice? please!
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Post by WherewolfTherewolf on Nov 2, 2010 20:17:53 GMT -5
The solo instruments later in the song could use more volume, sometimes they're a bit difficult to hear. In the beginning of the song, it sounds like a great swing style drum beat could compliment that jazzy type feeling you've got going. The transition feels like it needs a more "epic" style transition, maybe some more harder hitting instruments (maybe just try turning up the velocity on the piano) to give the transition more weight. The song often feels light on bass, maybe try adding in a bass line to augment the piano for the background.
As to where to go with it, you could try playing the part you just played before ending it now with piano (add some higher piano notes over it) a little longer and then transition back to something soft. You could also try ending it suddenly, then picking it up again to the part it was playing earlier with a heavier sound to it.
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Nov 2, 2010 20:43:02 GMT -5
Thanks for the ideas! I'll try to use them if I can! And what did ya mean by solo instruments?
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Post by WherewolfTherewolf on Nov 2, 2010 21:31:18 GMT -5
Well like that one Saxaphone-ish thing that improvised in the later part of the song could care to be a bit louder
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Post by Maestro Triplet (Larx) on Nov 2, 2010 21:40:34 GMT -5
First one sounds just a tad Zelda-inspired... just a little bit. They're all good, pretty cool compositions. Thanks! www.box.net/shared/y79de8x0tl^For this one, I'm not sure what to do next or what to fix, so comments, criticism, and errr uhhhh mmm iunno, advice? please! I feel like the song could use a nice strong snare in the beginning and a better transition to the crazier part of the song. It also sounds a bit empty, so maybe a nice bassline to go along with that melody would be great. Everything else sounds great. I love how the beginning soft and then it gets epic.
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Nov 7, 2010 20:03:52 GMT -5
Tried to incorporate some of the suggestions, and thanks for them!
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Nov 11, 2010 3:22:17 GMT -5
Double post
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Post by Dasgust on Nov 11, 2010 8:48:25 GMT -5
Double post Very nice and soothing.
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Dec 25, 2010 13:54:32 GMT -5
first post edited
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