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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Jun 7, 2011 0:29:57 GMT -5
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flameheadshero
Trainer
Spirits are always with you. Bwahahahaha!
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Post by flameheadshero on Jun 7, 2011 16:33:34 GMT -5
The trippy one sounds pretty good. I think the problem is that it feels like it's building up to something but then kinda just plateaus halfway through. Also the parts were everything seems to drop out kinda throw the whole thing off. If anything you need to keep the momentum up with a more moving drum beat and some variation in the baseline.
I don't know why you would want to scrap the Megaman one. Sounds great. I think the drums could use some variety. Also when the main melody comes in, it's the only thing playing. Maybe you could add some supporting parts, counter melodies or little additions in between that phrases.
Overall though, I think these are both good. Especially the trippy one, I 'd say it has a lot of potential. It made me think of the Miles Davis album Doo-bop. Don't know why but great job anyway.
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Jun 7, 2011 20:21:40 GMT -5
alright, thanks for the advice! I'll implement em in
and also, the trippy one is megaman too, if ya didn't know xD
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Aug 28, 2011 17:38:46 GMT -5
Trying out nexus 2 on this wip, looking for advice if anyone has time to listen~ Here's the original source
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Oct 7, 2011 0:24:55 GMT -5
a new wip in teh dust gust style
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Post by dblejoe7 on Oct 7, 2011 13:15:47 GMT -5
This is pretty. Like your mom face.
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Oct 7, 2011 21:43:45 GMT -5
This is pretty. Like your mom face. my mom's face is very pretty THnks
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Oct 22, 2011 1:51:42 GMT -5
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Oct 22, 2011 22:36:54 GMT -5
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Dec 24, 2011 3:02:41 GMT -5
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Dec 28, 2011 2:42:44 GMT -5
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Jan 1, 2012 3:01:38 GMT -5
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Post by OverpoweredSocks on Jan 12, 2012 2:28:51 GMT -5
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